Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, environmental issues are well-discussed topics and some individuals believe that the substantial environmental problem is
extinction
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the extinction
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of
plants
and
animals
.
On the other hand
, Opponents think there are more imperative
environment’s
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environment
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issues.
This
essay will discuss both these views and explain my opinion in conclusion.
Since
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thirty years, the
ecosystem
,
plants
and
animals
life have been changed .
in addition
, some people get concerned about and think
that is
a major
fact
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facet
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of the natural world’s problem caused by two facts.
Firstly
, it would be unbalancing of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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which leads to damaging the nature and
also
human’s
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human
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life.
For example
, factories would put their fertilizers in rivers.
As a result
,
soil
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the soil
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become
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becomes
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unhealthy.
Consequently
,
plant’s
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plant
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life would be damaged and if humans used these kinds of
plants
, they would get various decease.
Secondly
, wildlife would become destroyed if the environment and
ecosystem
been
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unbalanced.
For example
, the Australian jungles have burnt and many species of
animals
have gone extinct.
However
, the opponents think that there are more imperative territory problems, an Example can be seen as air pollution.
That is
effecting
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affecting
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on
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everything worldwide. If air quality became lower, acid rains would happen and the carbon
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footprint
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foot print
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footprint
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increases.
As a result
,
this
climate condition hurts everything seriously.
Moreover
, the other important problem would be global-warming. It leads to climate changes and the melting of polar ice which affects
on
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humans,
plants
,
animals
and the
ecosystem
. In conclusion, it seems there are many dominant nature problems but I suppose it is fair to say that issues
such
as
global-warming
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global warming
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has
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have
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priority
to
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over
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the loss
species
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of species
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of
animals
and
plants
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat
  • extinction
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable
  • conservation
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