Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world, environmental issues are well-discussed topics and some individuals believe that the substantial environmental problem is
extinction
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the extinction
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of
plants
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and
animals
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.
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, Opponents think there are more imperative
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environment
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issues.
This
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essay will discuss both these views and explain my opinion in conclusion.
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thirty years, the
ecosystem
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,
plants
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and
animals
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life have been changed .
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, some people get concerned about and think
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a major
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of the natural world’s problem caused by two facts.
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, it would be unbalancing of
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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which leads to damaging the nature and
also
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human’s
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life.
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, factories would put their fertilizers in rivers.
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,
soil
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the soil
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become
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unhealthy.
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,
plant’s
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life would be damaged and if humans used these kinds of
plants
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, they would get various decease.
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, wildlife would become destroyed if the environment and
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been
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unbalanced.
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, the Australian jungles have burnt and many species of
animals
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have gone extinct.
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, the opponents think that there are more imperative territory problems, an Example can be seen as air pollution.
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effecting
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on
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everything worldwide. If air quality became lower, acid rains would happen and the carbon
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footprint
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foot print
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increases.
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,
this
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climate condition hurts everything seriously.
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, the other important problem would be global-warming. It leads to climate changes and the melting of polar ice which affects
on
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humans,
plants
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,
animals
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and the
ecosystem
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. In conclusion, it seems there are many dominant nature problems but I suppose it is fair to say that issues
such
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as
global-warming
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global warming
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has
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priority
to
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over
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the loss
species
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of species
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of
animals
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and
plants
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat
  • extinction
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable
  • conservation
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