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The graph depicts the amount of money spent on clothing by a single person in dollars in the United States between 1985 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that in the two decades women purchased the maximum amount of
clothes
whereas
boys
'
clothes
remained the least.
Although
boys
',
girls
' and womens' clothing experienced a rise in the spending at the end of the
year
2005, mens' clothing noticed a decline. Taking into consideration the children's
clothes
,
Nevertheless
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the purchase of
boys
and
girls
clothes
remained the same in the
year
1985( with 90$ respectively), it showed an incline in the coming decade when the spending on
boys
and
girls
dresses marked at 100$ and 110$ respectively. Even though, in the
year
2005, the buying capacity of wearables for small
boys
remained unchanged a considerable escalation was seen in the spending on
girls
' outfits.
Furthermore
, spending on male and female clothing outnumbered that on
childrens'
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. With just double purchasing capacity, women spent 500$ per person in comparison to that their male counterparts. The spending on men's clothing inflated significantly in the
year
1995 whereas a slight rise was experienced in women's clothing.
However
, In the
year
2005, there was a decrease in the spending among male members while a sharp increase was noted in the spending female outfits.
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