Learning about the past has no valve for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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technology these days. It

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that obtaining historical knowledge from previous events has no benefit to humankind nowadays. I strongly disagree with

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with, there are many approaches to prevent negative effects

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society. To put it more simply, in many countries the precautions

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natural disasters are highly developed

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of heartbreaking experiences from the previous events.

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, there

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of nuclear weapons in case of war to combat opponents.

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, historians

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history a pivotal and interesting thing. Many solutions to most diseases nowadays are

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a result of investigations done by historians. It would be an omission not to emphasize

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, years ago most

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the pregnant women that could not deliver themselves end up

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after delivery struggles.

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, that brought scientists, doctors, and many health workers together to find

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to the phenomenon.

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section procedure was introduced into the health system for safe delivery. In respect to that,

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knowledge was acquired because of the documentation of the past event pertaining to

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of pregnant women on the day of delivery. In conclusion, even with global technological advancements, it is essential to acquire knowledge from

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past occurrence in order to prevent future danger and for future improvement.