You’ve just returned from a disastrous holiday! It was not as described by the agent and you experienced serious problems. Write a letter of complaint to the agent. In your letter - remind the agent about the holiday - explain to them what happened - ask for compensation

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to show my immense dissatisfaction with my recent horrible holiday trip to St. Cera towns 25 Km

far

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away

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from Miami Beach with booking reference number p13634511 and I require a full refund of my money. At the onset, I vividly remember you described to me

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holiday offer on the 23rd of

last

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month and listed a lot of benefits

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as free dinner and city rides

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insurance. Because not a single benefit was available there, I had to spend

extra

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$450 to get avail stay and meal options. Honestly, being a regular customer, I have never expected

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kind of false information from your side.

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, I want a full refund of my booking amount of $250 as I had paid all my expenses for the trip

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that place separately.

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, it would be sufficient for you to transfer the whole amount by next Friday into my account lest a legal discourse should be followed

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apply

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apply

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against you for deceiving me with wrong information. I hope you

would

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understand the

genuinity

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genuineness

of my situation and act

accordingly

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. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown

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task response

Provide specific details about the problems faced during the holiday to strengthen the argument and clearly state the compensations you are seeking.

coherence and cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is generally good, but consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the flow of information.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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