SOME People BELiEVE THAT EVERYONE HAS A RiGHT TO HAVE ACCESS TO UNiVERSiTY EDUCATiON AND TAT GOUS SHOULD MAKE IT FREE POR ALL STUDENTS NO MATTER WHAT FiNANCiAL BACKGKOUND THEY MAVE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DiSAGREE?

MANY PEOPLE ARE OF THE OPiNiON THAT IT IS EVERYONE"S ENTiTEMENT TOBE EMBARK ON FORMAL TERTIARY
EDUCATiON
,
MOREOVER
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THE administration HAVE TO PAY THE
EDUCATION
TUiTiON FOR ALL PUPiLS NO MATTER WHAT ECONOMY CAPABiLiTY THEY HAVE.
While
I DiSAGREE THAT THE COUNCiL NEED TO SUPPORT THE TUiTiON FEE FOR THE FRESHERS, I BELiEVE THAT
THiS
OPiNiON
ALSO
HAVE A GODD SiDE. ON THE ONE HAND, I
DiSAGREE
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THAT ALL THE
EDUCATiON
FEE is NECESSARY TO BE
FUlLY
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PAiD BY LEADERSHiPS.
FiRSTLY
, BECAUSE THE STATE OPERATES WITH TAX DOLLARS THAT THE PEOPLE PAY,
SO
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WiTH A LARGE NUMBER OF STUDENTS ACROSS THE COUNTRY, THE BUDGET WiLL BE DEFiCiT AND TO MAKE UP FOR THE DEFICiT, THE STATE WilL HAVE TO
iNCREASE TAXES
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WHiCH
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LEAD TO MANY NEGATiVE IMPACT ON SOCiETY
DUE TO
THE TAX HiKE IN MANY DiFFERENT CATEGORiES WiLL LEAD TO A HiGHER STANDARD OF LiViNG WHEREBY THE LOCALS HAVE TO WORK MARDER TO PAY FOR THOSE THRESHOLD NUMBERS.
MOREOVER
, THE PRESSURE ON
GOVERNMENT'S
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BUDGET
ALSO
MEANS THAT THERE
ARE
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LESS MONEY ALLOCATED FOR
OTHERS
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OTHER
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SECTORS,
SUCH
AS
:
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INFRASTRUCTURES
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AND HEALTHCARE.
SECONDLY
, BESiDE REDUCE WELFARE
THiS
INCiDENT
ALSO
CAUSED BAD RESULT ON THE INDiViDUAL WHiCH MEAN THAT IF THERE ARE TO MANY BACHELOR'S DEGREE HOLDER, Will RESULT IN A
JOB
SATURATiON. BASE ON THAT, THE MORE EDUCATED WORKFORCE STAND A LOWER CHANCE OF GETTiNG A
JOB
DUE TO
THE COMPETiTiVE OF THE
JOB
MARKET
ON THE OTHER HAND
, APART FROM THE PARTiCAL CONCERNS EXPRESSED ABOVE, I
ALSO
BELiEVE THAT
THiS
iDEA STiLL HAVE A POSiTIVE SiDE.
THIS
WOULD BE A BENEFiCiAL TO THE LESS FORTUNATE HAVE ACCESS TO HiGHER
EDUCATION
MOTiVATED THEM TO MAKE A BETTER
JOB
AND
THEN
A BETTER QUALiTY OF
LiFE
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.
FURTHERMORE
,
THIS
SiTUATiON
ALSO
BRiNG GOOD VALUE TO THE COUNTRY'S SOCiETY, BECAUSE THE MORE EDUCATED WORKFORCE , THE MORE DEVELOPED IN WORK ENViRONMENT FROM THAT THERE
ARE
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Will BE A THRiViNG ECONOMY . IN CONCLUSiON, FREE
EDUCATiON
TUITiON FOR
STUDENT CAN
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GiVE A
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have a
LOT OF
ADVANTAGE
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, BUT
THiS
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it
OPiNiON STILL
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is still
DiFFiCULT
TO
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IMPLEMENT BECAUSE THERE ARE MANY SHORTCOMINGS
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