Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #individuals

It is being argued by many

people

that nowadays individuals are more self-dependent, while

others

are totally against

this

fact and they perceive that ,still interpersonal relationships exist.

This

essay will take both the points into consideration and in my opinion,

people

will always be dependent on

others

emotionally and physically during their lifetime because it is the rule of nature, one has to be dependent to carry on the lifecycle. On one hand, it is inevitable to say that we are dependent on

others

for menial jobs.

In other words

, not everyone is perfect at doing everything so they might need the help of

others

to complete their

work

For example

, in India

people

are dependent on house helpers for their daily chores and one cannot even imagine a life without them.

This

will not only help them to become more effective and productive in their life but

also

makes them successful in their future because they are able to concentrate on their

work

On the other hand

others

opine on

this

statement and think that with the advent of western culture,

people

are more comfortable when they live alone and do not depend on

others

for their household

work

. To be more specific, whether it is cleaning of home or fixing of furniture, everything is being done by the person self.

For instance

, in America

people

are self-dependent and they do not rely on other

people

for any kind of

work

Therefore

, they are multi-talented and can fix their problems with ease. In conclusion,

This

will always remain a debatable issue.

However

, I will stick to my point and state that being dependable on

others

makes

people

responsible towards each other because it will help them productively.

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