Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people’s way of life. Others believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Across the globe, advertising during

sports

has been of widespread controversy. Some individuals believe that it is a welcome development as it helps boost

popularity

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the popularity

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of companies and reduce the financial burden of

sports

organisers

while others think it

act

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as a distraction during the sporting activity thereby making the process boring and tiring.

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essay will discuss both views and give my stance. On the one hand, advertisement is a way of increasing the popularity of a product. It has been noted that

majority

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of the populace

are

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interested in

sports

(,) so companies use

this

medium to create awareness about their products.

For instance

, during the world cup, Cocacola company advertised the various types of

product

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products

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they manufacture.

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, organising

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a sport

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sport

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programme can be expensive, so a consensus is made between the

organisers

and sponsors.

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agreement will benefit not only the company but alleviate the financial burden on the

organisers

.

On the other hand

, promoting products during

sports

serves as a distraction to viewers.

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occurs when

sport

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lovers who are already engrossed in the game, (no need for comma)

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the outcome

hence

any

further

broadcast outside what they are viewing keeps keep them on edge and in suspense. A survey conducted

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stated that

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of viewers became angry and violent during advertisements while watching the match between Chelsea and Manchester United in 2021.

Although

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there are some disadvantages

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this

,

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am of the opinion that the pros

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the cons as it allows people to be aware of some product that they never knew existed. In conclusion, while some people view advertisement during

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the sport

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sport

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process as a welcome development, others believe it is a waste of time.

This

essay discussed advantages like improving awareness of company products and reduction of expenses for

organisers

. It

also

stated its role as

distraction

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a distraction

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to viewers.