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With the rise of E-book comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good step forward, while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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The pie charts demonstrate the percentage of
females
 and
males
participated
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 in manual and non-manual
occupations
 in Great Britain in the year 1992.Overall, it can be seen that more
males
 occupied manual vacancies, while non-manual
jobs
 appealed more to
females
. In regard to manual
jobs
, more
males
 than
females
 were employed in these
occupations
, at 52% and 31% respectively. An almost equal proportion of
males
 joined craft or similar
occupation
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occupations
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 and other manual
jobs
, at around 24% and 26%. For ,women the pattern was slightly different
,
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 since the vast majority of them joined other manual
jobs
 at 27%, while a minority was attracted to craft or similar and general labourers at 3% and 1% respectively. Around 2% of
males
 are engaged as general labourers.
On the other hand
, non-manual
occupations
 were more popular among women, at 69%
in contrast
 to 48% among their
males
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 counterpart.
However
, it is interesting to note that more
males
 were positioned in managerial and professional vacancies than women, 36% and 29% respectively.
Nevertheless
, the proportion of
females
 in clerical or related
occupations
 exceeded that of men tremendously, at 31% and 6%.
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 equal proportion of
males
 and
females
 occupied other non-manual
occupations
 at 6% and 9% respectively.
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