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Some people say that the best of improve road safety is to icrease the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Road
 safety is affected by a variety of factors. There are those who think that
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 the legal
age
 for driving different vehicles is the best
way
 to enhance
road
 security. I partially agree with
this
 statement, increasing the minimum legal
age
 would be an effective
way
 but other precautions should be implemented.
This
 essay will put forward two reasons to elucidate my point of view.
Initially
, Increasing the legal
age
 ensures that people on the
road
 are aware of the responsibilities regarding the driving license.
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 to the news I have read, the youth drivers cause the vast majority of car accidents in comparison to elder drivers. Some of them, who are unable to foresee the results of the
way
 of driving, consider dangerous driving styles acceptable because of a lack of experience. Parents should be taught
children
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 traffic awareness.
On the other hand
, Maintenance of traffic, demands theoretical knowledge.
However
such
 knowledge might be underestimated by driving courses which play an important role in teaching traffic rules.
In other words
, The courses should be controlled about whether the curriculum is applied properly or not. The authorities not only control the courses but
also
 set up laws to diminish the rate of underestimation. In conclusion, increasing the minimum legal
age
 would be a good
way
 to provide
road
 security but I am of the opinion that it is not sufficient on its own.
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