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In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, whileThe In some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the mony outweigh the disadvantages?

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The graph depicts the proportion of females who had given
birth
 to their
first
 kid in different
age
 brackets from 1966 to 2006 in Australia. Overall, it is evident that the maximum number of
birth
 was given in the
year
 1966 in the
age
bracket
 of 19 to 24 and the least was recorded in 1986 in the
age
bracket
 of 40 and more. Formerly, more ladies were pregnant when they were young ,
however
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 in 2006 females preferred to give
birth
 after the
age
 of 30. In 1966, 33% of the women became pregnant when they were in their teenage, while
this
 figure dropped considerably before reaching 11% in the
year
 2006.
On the other hand
, ladies in the
age
bracket
 of 19 to 24 gave
birth
 to twice more children in 1966.
Although
,
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this
age
 group experienced the highest amount of births among them, it
further
 showed a significant decline in the four decades where it was noted at less than one-
third
 of
birth
.
Furthermore
, the
age
 group of 25 to 30 experienced fluctuation in its time period, where the number of births
first
 increased in the
first
 two decades and reached 50% before falling to 28% in the
year
 2006. With the change in generation, more women preferred to get pregnant after the
age
 of 30. There was a drastic escalation in the proportion of giving
birth
. The number of females that gave
birth
 has increased quadruplet from 12% to 48% in the
year
 2006. Even though
,
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 a rise can
also
 be seen in the
age
bracket
 of 34 to 39 ,
still
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 it is less in comparison to the 30 to 34
age
 group.
Nevertheless
, after the
age
 of ,40 a slight increase was noticed from 2% to 5%.
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