Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free, others say that they are just a waste of public money? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, public space is becoming significant. Some
people
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claim that public
libraries
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are an important resource and should not be
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. Others believe it is
waste
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a waste
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of government
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. In
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essay, I will examine why I totally agree with
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statement.
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, I believe it is important for public
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should be free.
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of all,
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are
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important
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for
people
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who want to read
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or looking for some information.
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means that if it is free anyone is able to use
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place even if you are poor or rich.
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, students who do not have more
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to buy
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, but can search for
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that they would like to read in the
libraries
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because it is free.
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, if public
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do not fee, it would support reading
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.
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is because there are a lot of
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in
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such
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as novel
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, children's
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, textbooks, historical
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, and economics
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.
People
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can read many genres of
books
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that they want.
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, if they must buy every book that they want to read, some
people
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can not do that and do not chance to read many
books
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.
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, some
people
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believe that public
libraries
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waste public
money
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.
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, they are concerned about the investment cost.
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, if their government plan new public
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, it will cost amount of
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.
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, they do not support
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because they argue that
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should be spent on medical welfare or free college education.
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, some of them are probably wealthy and do not need to use public
libraries
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.
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, these
people
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can buy their own
books
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when they want to read them. All in all, public
libraries
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have a lot of benefits for the general
people
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. If governments spend more
money
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on
libraries
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, their citizens will read more
books
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in the future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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