Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free, others say that they are just a waste of public money? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, public space is becoming significant. Some
people
claim that public
libraries
are an important resource and should not be
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. Others believe it is
waste
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of government
money
. In
this
essay, I will examine why I totally agree with
this
statement.
To begin
, I believe it is important for public
libraries
should be free.
First
of all,
libraries
are
an
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important
places
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for
people
who want to read
books
or looking for some information.
This
means that if it is free anyone is able to use
this
place even if you are poor or rich.
For example
, students who do not have more
money
to buy
books
, but can search for
books
that they would like to read in the
libraries
because it is free.
Second
, if public
libraries
do not fee, it would support reading
books
.
This
is because there are a lot of
books
in
libraries
such
as novel
books
, children's
books
, textbooks, historical
books
, and economics
books
.
People
can read many genres of
books
that they want.
For Instance
, if they must buy every book that they want to read, some
people
can not do that and do not chance to read many
books
.
However
, some
people
believe that public
libraries
waste public
money
.
Firstly
, they are concerned about the investment cost.
In other words
, if their government plan new public
libraries
, it will cost amount of
money
.
For instance
, they do not support
this
because they argue that
money
should be spent on medical welfare or free college education.
Secondly
, some of them are probably wealthy and do not need to use public
libraries
.
Consequently
, these
people
can buy their own
books
when they want to read them. All in all, public
libraries
have a lot of benefits for the general
people
. If governments spend more
money
on
libraries
, their citizens will read more
books
in the future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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