Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nuclear
weapons
are
weapons
of mass destruction which don’t hold any positive value in the
world
.The nations owning
such
weapons
have dominated the
world
by instilling fear.
Moreover
,the usage of these can result in devastating adverse effects.   Global power is determined by the
amount
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of nuclear
weapons
amassed by different
countries
.In times of conflict and crisis,these destructive
weapons
in their possession are the barrier to an effective diplomatic response from those
countries
devoid of them.The nuclear threat posed by
such
countries
is holding the
world
at a
gun point
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.
For example
,
the
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Russia-Ukraine war,the technology of destruction on Russia’s side was used as an aid for asserting power.  
Also
,in a worst-case scenario where
such
weapons
are misused,the extent of damage to humanity and the earth is beyond imagination.It has the potential to wipe
of
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a significant portion of the population,
result
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in
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long lasting
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severe diseases which could be even transmitted to
a
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many
next
generations.The explosion could turn the environment uninhabitable for any form of living
beings
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.
For instance
, Hiroshima and Nagasaki  bomb attacks are
the
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depressing
reminder
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of the destructive ability of atomic bombs.   To conclude,I believe that atomic fusion-powered
weapons
are the biggest threat to a peaceful
world
and can never benefit it in any way.The current powerful
countries
derive
the
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strength from the fear of
countries
without
such
mass
weapon
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weapons
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.
Furthermore
,accidental or irresponsible use of these can even wipe off life from
earth
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