Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nuclear
weapons
are weapons
of mass destruction which don’t hold any positive value in the world
.The nations owning such
weapons
have dominated the world
by instilling fear.Moreover
,the usage of these can result in devastating adverse effects.
Global power is determined by the amount
of nuclear Change the quantifier
number
weapons
amassed by different countries
.In times of conflict and crisis,these destructive weapons
in their possession are the barrier to an effective diplomatic response from those countries
devoid of them.The nuclear threat posed by such
countries
is holding the world
at a gun point
.Correct your spelling
gunpoint
For example
, the
Russia-Ukraine war,the technology of destruction on Russia’s side was used as an aid for asserting power.
Change preposition
in the
Also
,in a worst-case scenario where such
weapons
are misused,the extent of damage to humanity and the earth is beyond imagination.It has the potential to wipe of
a significant portion of the population,Replace the word
off
result
in Wrong verb form
resulting
Add a hyphen
long-lasting
long lasting
severe diseases which could be even transmitted to Add a hyphen
long-lasting
a
many Correct article usage
the
next
generations.The explosion could turn the environment uninhabitable for any form of living beings
.Fix the agreement mistake
being
For instance
, Hiroshima and Nagasaki bomb attacks are the
depressing Correct article usage
a
reminder
of the destructive ability of atomic bombs.
To conclude,I believe that atomic fusion-powered Change the noun form
reminders
weapons
are the biggest threat to a peaceful world
and can never benefit it in any way.The current powerful countries
derive the
strength from the fear of Change the word
their
countries
without such
mass weapon
. Fix the agreement mistake
weapons
Furthermore
,accidental or irresponsible use of these can even wipe off life from earth
.Add an article
the earth
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