You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.
Dear Sir,
I, Kuljeet Kaur, residing near your locality, writing to you to express my desire to study language with you. I got very excited when I came to know that a well-qualified teacher
is
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Firstly
, I heard about you from one of my friends who is your neighbour and lived there for about a period of four years.Secondly
, he also
takes classes from you and elaborates on the way you adopt to
teach your children which impressed me a lot.
Adding on, I want to grasp Verb problem
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this
language in order to have a good command of it which further
helps me to accomplish my goals in future. As
I want to pursue my education in another nation where it is of great use. Correct word choice
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Therefore
, for the betterment of my interest, I would like to take classes from you.
Also
, I want to join the group in an evening batch as in the morning time I am a little bit busy. Furthermore
, I also
want to know about the fees for the whole course.So, I want you to please forward the details so that I can manage my schedule as well as
my funds.
Hoping to get a reply from your side.
Thanks.
Yours Faithfully,
Kuljeet Kaur.Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, and use linking words to connect ideas throughout the letter. Also, consider restructuring the closing for a more formal tone.
task achievement
The letter adequately addresses the task requirements and maintains a suitable writing tone. However, consider expanding on the reasons for wanting to learn English to further enhance task response.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
