You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter: Say where / when you went on holiday Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday Tell them what you would like them to do

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I hope

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letter finds you well.

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is Saeed Foroughi nia writing, to draw your attention to say I am not satisfied with my trip.

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, I want to say I had been going to Tehran with your agency in the

last

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week for holiday and

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travel was full important to me because I want to visit my parents.

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that is

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why I need to help me find my parent's location but your tour guide cannot help me to find them and after that when I was hungry or thirsty I could not buy anything for myself because all the date we have not extra age for each work so in , the fact I have not good trip with your staff.

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, sometimes your tour guide introduced tourist attractions in the Tehran city and that was a good date for me but that was not all I wanted.I would

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help me to find my parents and regard me if I need something for my

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travel with you.

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is all I would like to share with you.Thank you for taking the time to read

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letter. looking forward to receiving your reply. Writing for your reply. Yours faithfully, Saeed Foroughi nia

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

206 words

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You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter: Say where / when you went on holiday Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday Tell them what you would like them to do

The Greeting

Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

NOWADAYS, PARENTS ARE ALLOWING THEIR CHILDREN TO USE TABLES AND SMARTPHONES TO ENHANCE LEARNING. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS DEVELOPMENT OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

Some experts think that universal basic income only makes sense if it provides just enough to survive on so that people still need to work and earn money for living . To what extent do you agree?

Topic: Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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