Courses in music and art should be compulsory for student in high school. Do you agree or disagree with the idea.

Over the

last

decade,

arts

are becoming more popular in the world. The importance of art and music

to be

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mandatory in high school

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was always debatable but now it is more controversial. I believe that

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would be more stimulated with extracurricular activities

such

as

arts

,

crafts

, and dance and why

I

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accepting

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this

notion and explained

in

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further

. In fact,

arts

and music are not only giving entertainment but

also

play a significant role in humans. Because

,

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brain

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is being activated with extracurricular activities and improves the creativity in the students.

Moreover

, these days

crafts

and composing are becoming a profession

as a result

those are led to

discovery

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, innovation, and research. One clear example is that, if a person is having an interest in

arts

then

he could be more energetic and they can acquire anything in that area. Some public

argue

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that if a student

having

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an extra activities

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then

they can

be easily attract

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to distractions and might not be good at education. Actually,

education

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final goal is to generate more income.

Nevertheless

, studies

are not only give

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money but hobbies are

also

becoming to generate money.

For instance

, photography is

also

a

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art and now it is a profession

and

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earning a huge amount of

proft

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profit

. Government should encourage to learn

crafts

in

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the

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early age. In conclusion,

arts

and music are gifted actions, everybody can not achieve them.

However

, in my point of view schooling system must encourage to go through in

crafts

then

students are being improved in that and it is led to improvement in academics

also

.