Nowadays, young people lack an understanding of how to manage their finances after they finish high school. Explain why they do not know how to manage money, and how this can be changed
In the current era, youngsters do not know how to spend
money
and, they have not enough knowledge
regarding financial arrangements because of a deficiency of experience
and field education
this
problem can clear up through the parents’ guidance and use of banking facilities.
The reason why adult people do not know how to manage finance
because
of a lack of Add a missing verb
is because
experience
and field education
. Nowadays, children are not getting enough education
due to the money
temptation. They want to become rich in a very short time without any effort and knowledge
. The second
reason is that they do not have at least experience
means if you do not have enough experience
you are not able to manage the finance
satisfactorily. For example
, in this
era almost younger people can join their family business and get loss or less profit due to the not enough understanding of finance
.
However
, to solve this
problem as per my perception parents should give some knowledge
to their children regarding finance
and should be taught some banking facilities like, how to use a credit card, debit card, as well as should give some pocket money
to them so they can arrange by themselves and if they are using by some wrong way then
parents should have to teach them. For example
, my parent gives me pocket money
every month and, end of the month I give my spending calculations to them.
To conclude, youngsters have a lack of financial understanding and management skills but it can only solve through the proper finance
education
, parent guidance, and extreme knowledge
regarding banking facilities as well as schemes so younger people get to know how to manage finance
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