Nowadays, young people lack an understanding of how to manage their finances after they finish high school. Explain why they do not know how to manage money, and how this can be changed

In the current era, youngsters do not know how to spend
money
and, they have not enough
knowledge
regarding financial arrangements because of a deficiency of
experience
and field
education
this
problem can clear up through the parents’ guidance and use of banking facilities. The reason why adult people do not know how to manage
finance
because
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is because
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of a lack of
experience
and field
education
. Nowadays, children are not getting enough
education
due to the
money
temptation. They want to become rich in a very short time without any effort and
knowledge
. The
second
reason is that they do not have at least
experience
means if you do not have enough
experience
you are not able to manage the
finance
satisfactorily.
For example
, in
this
era almost younger people can join their family business and get loss or less profit due to the not enough understanding of
finance
.
However
, to solve
this
problem as per my perception parents should give some
knowledge
to their children regarding
finance
and should be taught some banking facilities like, how to use a credit card, debit card, as well as should give some pocket
money
to them so they can arrange by themselves and if they are using by some wrong way
then
parents should have to teach them.
For example
, my parent gives me pocket
money
every month and, end of the month I give my spending calculations to them. To conclude, youngsters have a lack of financial understanding and management skills but it can only solve through the proper
finance
education
, parent guidance, and extreme
knowledge
regarding banking facilities as well as schemes so younger people get to know how to manage
finance
.
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