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Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer ‎activities and lifestyles in cold climates. Discuss both views, and give your ‎opinion.‎

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Some people prefer to live in hot
climates
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 while others have the opposite opinion. I think they both have some brilliant advantages, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. Let's talk about living in cold
climates
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first
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Winter
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 can be lovely in some areas.
For example
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, there are many European
countries
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 that are famous for their winters,
such
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 as Austria or Iceland. In those
countries
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, you can enjoy the beauty of the
snow
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 and visit the charming
winter
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 markets in
winter
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.
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, some festivals are invariably intertwined with
snow
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, like Christmas. I have been to the Christmas market in Germany,
it
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and it
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 was impressive, but
snow
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 could even boost its fascination. It's worth mentioning that some
countries
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 are prettier in
winter
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 than they are in summer,
such
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 as Iceland.
This
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 country is famous for its solar light in
winter
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. When the solar light envelops the whole country, it can be an unforgettable experience.
On the other hand
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, hot
climates
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 can be fascinating too.
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, the Maldives is famous for its beaches. You can enjoy the heat waves, explore the sea, and closely contact those marine animals there. Those things are impossible in
winter
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. In my opinion, I like both
climates
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. I can go to beaches in hot climate
countries
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,
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 as Spain, and have a good time on the beach.
On the other hand
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, I can watch the
snow
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 or go skiing in those cold climate
countries
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. Take my experience as an example, I love having dinner with my family in the garden in summer, but I
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 like having a snowball fight in
winter
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. In conclusion, both
climates
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 are attractive and I like them all.
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