What are the problem of increasing city size ? What is the solution?

It is a fact that a majority of people leaving the rural
areas
and moving to the urban
areas
. There are several reasons for
such
a situation. There are two main causes of the problem
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career
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opportunity
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and medical facilities. In
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essay, I will discuss both
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aspects in the ensuring paragraphs with possible solutions. Discussing the reasons, the most common one is
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opportunity.
This
is because every year number of students are moving to the
cities
for studies.
However
, after the
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completion
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competition
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, students get jobs and decide to live in the same city. By
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I mean that, if they get job opportunities only in
cities
then
they have to stay there.
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is the main reason
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population in
cities
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solution would be
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government
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the government
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should start new projects in rural
areas
to recruit
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freshers. So that, it will give them hope for
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future in their hometown. Another problem that needs to be considered is medical facilities. Due to
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of hospitals,
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of people
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move to the
cities
for the proper medication.
This
is to say, a person who is suffering from cancer and
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decided to move
any
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metro city for his treatment with their family.
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, For
this
issue,
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should have to establish new hospitals
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two or more towns which have all medical facilities and all treatment is available for all
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of
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.
Thus
, to conclude the topic it can be
finally
commented that availability sufficient hospitals in town for all kind of patients and good future opportunity for the students, will
definately
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definitely
decrease the some of the population of the urban
areas
.
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