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‏The animal species are becoming extinct ‏due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

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Animal
species
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 are essential in the ecological balance. In
case
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 of extinct of some
animals
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 kind,
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 might
cause
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 many problems. The reason behind the shortage of different kinds of
animals
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 might vary as well as the results. Interacting with natural resources in a negative way is one of the main reasons that affect
animals
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' habitat and safety. Long ago there were more forests than nowadays, but the population want more space to build their houses so some might cut off trees to build entire cities and some might even bury the sea. And all these deeds will
cause
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 damage to many types of
animals
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 that depend upon forests and seas to survive. Another reason is hunting. Some communities consider hunting
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essential in their life either to provide themselves with food, to protect their family or even for entertainment. All of these reasons are under one umbrella which is hunting will
cause
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 shortages of animal
species
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 if we will not consider some legislation. Many
species
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 end just because of
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 activity like some kind of birds and wild
animals
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.
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 humankind can affect the environment with their activities still the Earth is in rapid change and some
species
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 are extinct just because of
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 change. An earthquake, tsunami, or even a volcano can
cause
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 massive damage as well. So we cannot blame only society's actions. In general, all
species
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 in the world play a very important role to create balance in the natural environment. On the one ,hand public's actions might
cause
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 a huge impact on nature and
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 nature to recover very quickly from
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 distraction.
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