We have a mixture of people from different cultures and ethnic groups in a country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days every
country
provides extensive support for diversified culture as many people across the globe
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to other nations
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lifestyle
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.Individuals from
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of
cummunities
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communities
from different locations bring multiple cultures and traditions.
Although
some citizens oppose
such
mixture
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, In my opinion, it provides
opportunity
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to explore many cultures and share knowledge. To commence with, when an area is filled with various
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ethnic
ethinc
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ethnic
groups and religions that provides an opportunity
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locals to explore multiple traditions, food, and clothing.
As each
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community have
there
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authentic dishes, outfits and
custums
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customs
costumes
.
For instance
, India is a diversified
country
because of various religions & cultures followed across the
country
,
indians
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often wide variety of
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restaurants
restaturants
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restaurants
, different ethnic
wears
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and in-house events.
Besides
that, each
country
have
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distinct festivals celebrated in a unique way one must be lucky to participate
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those activities. To illustrate, Diwali is famous in India,
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festival in China, and hallowen in western countries.
In addition
to exploration, one cannot deny that diversified associates
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the architecture by adding their authentic skills
on
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modern infrastructure. Imaginably, different folks from different regions can construct
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ninth wonder by combing all eight wonders of the world.
Moreover
, it is an opportunity to learn a new language.
For example
, most people in India speak more than three languages
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is possible due
diversification
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.
Finally
, to
reacapitulate
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recapitulate
,
mixture
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a mixture
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of people in the same place have the aforementioned advantages
such
as which enable
ability
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the ability
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to exchange authentic food, clothing and festivals between different society folks.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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