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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists visit such places?

#tourists #places #conditions #sahara #desert #antarctic #visit
These days a great number of
tourists
 are visiting
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the
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Sahra
desert
 or the Antarctic which have
hard
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the hard
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condition
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conditions
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.
Although
,
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apply
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 it can
may
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some drawbacks as well, it has advantages for
tourists
. The
first
advantages
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advantage
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 is that
this
 visit can be
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an exiting
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exciting
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exiting
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exciting
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 event for
tourists
 who love
travel
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to travel
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 to
the
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apply
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places with
different
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a different
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condition
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conditions
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. The reason is that they can see special scenes that nobody has seen
those
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apply
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.
For instance
,they can see
wonderful
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the wonderful
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 sky in
Sahra
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the Sahra
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desert
 at night.
Moreover
, they can receive new
experience
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experiences
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such
 as
condition
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conditions
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 or type
life
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of life
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in
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apply
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there. They can get new information
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, in addition,
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in addition
 to
visit
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visiting
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 through
this
trip
.
As a
result
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,result
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this
trip
 will be
high
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a high
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 benefit
trip
 for them.
On the other hand
,
tourists
 may face with danger problems like
Sahra
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the Sahra
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desert
 because if they do not have
accurate
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an accurate
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 location, they will lose the way.
For example
, they will lose without Marin the
Sahra
desert
 because it has sandy hills similar to each other.
Secondly
,
danger
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dangerous
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 animals may attack them
such
 as
snake
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snakes
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 or Scorpio. They have to protect themselves during the
trip
 the reason is that there may not be medical facilities .
As a
result
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 every wrong choice or decision can
creat
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create
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 deadly dangers for them, so they must have careful
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planning
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planing
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planning
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 for these
trip
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trips
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. In conclusion, these
visited
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visits
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 can have a lot of advantages
such
 as seeing special scenes and receiving new experiences. If these visits
be
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are
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 without
Vergil
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Vergil's
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planing
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planning
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,
it
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they
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 can have deadly dangers like getting
lose
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lost
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 or attacking them by dangerous animals.
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