Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists visit such places?
These days a great number of
tourists
are visitingCorrect article usage
the
Sahra
desert
or the Antarctic which have hard
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the hard
a hard
condition
. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Although
,
it can Remove the comma
apply
may
some drawbacks as well, it has advantages for Remove a modal verb
apply
tourists
.
The first
advantages
is that Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
this
visit can be Correct article usage
an exiting
Correct your spelling
exciting
exiting
event for Correct your spelling
exciting
tourists
who love travel
to Fix the infinitive
to travel
the
places with Correct article usage
apply
different
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a different
condition
. The reason is that they can see special scenes that nobody has seenFix the agreement mistake
conditions
those
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
,they can see wonderful
sky in Add an article
the wonderful
Sahra
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the Sahra
desert
at night. Moreover
, they can receive new experience
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experiences
such
as condition
or type Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
life
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of life
in
there. They can get new informationChange preposition
apply
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, in addition,
in addition
to visit
through Wrong verb form
visiting
this
trip
.As a
result
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,result
this
trip
will be high
benefit Correct article usage
a high
trip
for them.
On the other hand
, tourists
may face with danger problems like Sahra
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the Sahra
desert
because if they do not have accurate
location, they will lose the way. Add an article
an accurate
the accurate
For example
, they will lose without Marin the Sahra
desert
because it has sandy hills similar to each other. Secondly
, danger
animals may attack them Replace the word
dangerous
such
as snake
or Scorpio. They have to protect themselves during the Fix the agreement mistake
snakes
trip
the reason is that there may not be medical facilities . As a
result
every wrong choice or decision can Add a comma
,result
creat
deadly dangers for them, so they must have careful Correct your spelling
create
Correct your spelling
planning
planing
for these Correct your spelling
planning
trip
.
In conclusion, these Fix the agreement mistake
trips
visited
can have a lot of advantages Replace the word
visits
such
as seeing special scenes and receiving new experiences. If these visits be
without Change the verb form
are
Vergil
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Vergil's
planing
, Correct your spelling
planning
it
can have deadly dangers like getting Correct pronoun usage
they
lose
or attacking them by dangerous animals.Wrong verb form
lost
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