Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists visit such places?

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These days a great number of

tourists

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are visiting

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Sahra

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desert

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or the Antarctic which have

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condition

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some drawbacks as well, it has advantages for

tourists

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advantages

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is that

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visit can be

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an exiting

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exiting

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event for

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who love

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the

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places with

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condition

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. The reason is that they can see special scenes that nobody has seen

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,they can see

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sky in

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desert

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at night.

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, they can receive new

experience

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experiences

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such

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condition

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conditions

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or type

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there. They can get new information

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visit

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through

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trip

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result

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this

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will be

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benefit

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for them.

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tourists

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may face with danger problems like

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Sahra

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desert

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because if they do not have

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location, they will lose the way.

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Sahra

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desert

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because it has sandy hills similar to each other.

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danger

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animals may attack them

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snake

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or Scorpio. They have to protect themselves during the

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the reason is that there may not be medical facilities .

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result

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every wrong choice or decision can

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deadly dangers for them, so they must have careful

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planing

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for these

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trip

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. In conclusion, these

visited

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can have a lot of advantages

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as seeing special scenes and receiving new experiences. If these visits

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without

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planing

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can have deadly dangers like getting

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or attacking them by dangerous animals.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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252 words

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists visit such places?

Your opinion

Many believe that learning a language at an early age is better while others think such language should be taught later. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, it is possible to buy a wide variety of foods, which have been transported from all over the world. Do the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks?

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn't be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include relevant examples.