Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and school have open space design instead of seperate rooms. Why is it so? Do you think it is a positive development or negative?

Nowadays, a new trend ramps up in working spaces and
schools
regarding their interior design. A big open
area
is now more popular than in the past. As far as I am concerned, I think
this
change has
it
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merits and should be welcomed. The predominant reason for the wider adoption of an open
area
is the ascending trend of working from home. In the past, every employee in the office has his own desk, with a separate computer on it. Starting two years ago, companies are more open-minded about letting employees work from home some of the time. The office space is now filled with long tables, and those employees who need to check in on a particular day just find their own seat, which is not fixed. Meeting
rooms
are still available for booking to the needy, but undeniably the
rooms
required are fewer than before. As for
schools
, some tuition
schools
now prefer to have big theatres for students to have lectures or even watch videos, in order to save
costs
for teachers. The saved
costs
can
consequently
be used to reduce
price
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and entice more students to join. The immediate advantage of
this
trend is that
,
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a smaller
area
is now needed and companies and
schools
can save
rent
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.
This
is even more meaningful to the top-graded companies as rent is expensive in prime areas.
In addition
, in a lot of areas in the world, heating
costs
or air-conditioning
costs
are massive, the smaller
area
occupied and the more centralized design help to conserve energy and contribute to a smaller energy bill.
Nevertheless
, it is not free of problems. Working in open spaces sometimes leads to inadequate communication as meeting
rooms
are often occupied. If the material discussed is confidential, a lack of face-to-face communication may lead to a drop in efficiency. In conclusion, the fact that offices are having more open space is
meritful
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merciful
to me, as the potential hazards can be solved by reserving more meeting
rooms
in the office design stage.
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