STUDENTS SHOULD PAY THE FULL COST FOR THEIR OWN STUDY, BECAUSE UNIVERSITY EDUCATION BENEFITS INDIVIDUALS RATHER THAN SOCIETY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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during their

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the priority of university education is individuals

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society. The writer

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with

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statement and

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essay will illustrate the reasons why. It can be understood that nowadays the demand

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college

in

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is increasing. Because of

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lead to the requirement of

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cost risen.

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, not every

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to afford

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that

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.

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, if your family let you study in a private

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they will think about the cost before

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apply

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but if you study in a public

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with the results you gained to apply for that

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and you still have to pay

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as

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the cost of private

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it will not fair.

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, some students try to study to get

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of paying

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, the

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are not valuable. Another point worth is that the full

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helps

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a lot in upgrading or

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the facilities in

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and it can

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the environment better.

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true but the students will get

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for

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lead

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to problems that they want to earn

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to help their families and they will lose

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between manage timetable and studying.

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, a student has to do both works to make

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and maintain good grades so if they have

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they can do it but rarely because most of the time they are focusing on studying not making

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in university. As a final observation, the alternative of paying

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is considered. It might

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with the schools but with

students

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it will make a big pressure and the quality of

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will decrease.