Success is often measure by wealth and material belonging. Do you think wealth is best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

Traditionally, some communities across the globe measure success using many factors
such
as wealth, health, and popularity. In my perspective, financial status is not a suitable parameter to gauge success. A successful
person
is someone who achieves work-life balance and contributes to a social cause. To commence with, these days in search of wealth some people act like robots. To enlighten, some employees spend extended hours in the office and no
time
for family and friends due to which they may earn extra income but
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their quality
time
to live life.
For instance
, As per a recent survey conducted by the Employment Welfare reveals that more than 75% of workers extend their working hours. Since they spend most of their
time
in the workplace their older parents move to orphan homes as they need support with their daily routines with respect to medication, food and clothing.
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the end, these people may have financial assets but lose relationships.
In addition
to work-life balance,
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successful
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successfull
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successful
person
supports and
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social services. To explain
further
, one cannot deny that donation to social services either in the form of money or
time
is
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best service that human beings can do to their communities.
For instance
,
Although
Mr.
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Ambani is
a
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richest business
person
in India, he has got no followers; his counterpart,
Mr.
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Ratan Tata got a lot of followers as he donates 50% of his income to society and
that is
one of the reasons people call him
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person
.
Therefore
, supporting social
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rather
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selfish is
also
a
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one of the qualities.
Finally
, to recapitulate, Measuring success is a subjective topic each
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individual
indiviual
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individual
might have different criteria;
however
, in my perspective, it is
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evaluated
based on
achievement
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the achievement
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of balanced life and behaviour towards supporting society.
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