Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

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lifestyle in many

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all over the world. It is believed that the quality of life is declining in many big

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. There are causes that lead to

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problem and methods to solve it.

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with, the main cause of the life’s quality being affected is

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noise and air pollution from

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transportations

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. Nowadays, every

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a car and the quantities of

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on

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been rising significantly. The usage of these transportations may lead to

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in carbon monoxide gas which

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detrimental to health

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the respiratory system.

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, the honking sound from

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causing stress to mankind. There are myriads of solutions to tackle

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problem and one of the methods is by implementing the usage of electric

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and

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. Many modern technologies

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created

cars

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that

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renewable energies

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as

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electricity in order to reduce

pollutions

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pollution

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. When the amount of these previously stated harmful gases

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reduced in

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, humans are able to breathe fresh and clean air that

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free from pollutants.

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, businesses and organisations may encourage their employees to

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carpooling as a practice to reduce the amount of vehicles in many

cities

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. The reduction of

cars

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may lead to a noise-free and cleaner air in large

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. In conclusion,

it is clear that

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the main cause of the quality of life decreases is because of there is a rise in

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of vehicles on

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which can lead to breathing issues.

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, it is crucial to take

actions

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in order to solve

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problem

such

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as carpooling and the use of electric

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.