Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce poverty in the world. Others say economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people say that economic
development
is necessary to reduce
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poverty
povert
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poverty
in the world. Others say economic
growth
should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Development
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of a country or nation is necessary. According to
few
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a few
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individuals
development
in
economic
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the economic
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sector is important to decrease scarcity, while
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that economic
growth
should be banned
instead
of harming
environment
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the environment
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. I opine
to
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the necessity of economic
development
owing to the reasons given below. Analysing the previous opinion, the main
arguments
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that would be put forward is unemployment.
This
is because through improvement in
economy
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the economy
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jobs would increase and
thus
poverty can be reduced.
In addition
, they
also
believe that economic
growth
affects
environment
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,
resources
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and resources
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will be overused.
On the contrary
, the latter view
suggest
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that
growth
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the growth
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of
economy
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the economy
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requires space for infrastructure
this
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destroying
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destroys
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the habitat.
For instance
, flats are built for economic purposes
inturn
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in turn
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affects
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affecting
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natural resources. In conclusion, I would say that economy should grow for better
development
. It is the most appropriate way to deal
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situation.
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