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Ensuring that regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste school time having sports lesson as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

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The physical
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exercise
exercises
excercise
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exercise
are
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 fundamental to every human being for the better development of
the
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body fitness.People are of the opinion that,
to
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confirm that frequent practice should be the duty of the mother and
therefore
 ,learning
institution
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institutions
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 should not misuse
time
having
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 games lesson as part of the curriculum.In my opinion,
i
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 disagree with the above assertion as
i
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 will elaborate in the paragraphs.
Firstly
,during
this
comtemporary
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contemporary
 era,fathers are very engaged with very hectic schedules
such
 that they do not have
time
 for themselves.
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In addition
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In addition
,students spent most of
the
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 active
time
 in the
instituitions
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institutions
 so
parents
 have very little
time
 to engage them in an
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exercise
excercise
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exercise
activities
 which actually cannot be satisfying.
For example
,
a
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 research done by
University
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the University
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 of Nairobi depicts that 40% of children who depend on
parents
 to engage in
a games
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games
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 are not flexible.
Therefore
,since a child
spend
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 most of the
day
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daily
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 activity in school,
parents
 should support the institution in facilitating some of
this
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these
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activities
Secondly
,teachers should encourage
youngones
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young ones
 to engage themselves in
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the workout
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workout
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workouts
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 as well as inform them about the importance of physical
activities
 for their future and it is with
this
 interest that
the
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they
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 can discover their
strength
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strengths
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 through their
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performance
perfomance
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performance
.
Moreover
,there is
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 of receiving an award or cash for
a top players
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top players
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 during
a
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competition.
For example
,several state
school
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schools
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 have received funds from organisations because of furnishing games
activities
 and engaging in
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competition
competion
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competition
 in developed countries.
Therefore
,an education centre
have
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 a mandate of scheduling an athletics for the learners as they will help them
be know
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 the merits of fitness. To sum up,an organisation has a vital role in
physical
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 growth of the learners as they spend most of the
time
 with them.
However
,
parents
 are already overloaded to be able to fully commit to
this
 kind of
an
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engagement.
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