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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extend you agree or disagree?

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Nuclear technology has been a revolutionizing innovation Peace is maintained globally because of nuclear ammunition, and cheaper and cleaner energy produced with the help of nuclear plants.
This
 essay partially agrees with the statement and will describe how
this
 machinery has an equal number of merits and demerits. There are several advantages of nuclear technology.
To begin
 with, countries maintain cordial relationships with nuclear power states. The reason behind
that is
 to evade the risk of getting attacked by them. Overall
this
 leads to peace in international relations because of deterrence from each other.
Furthermore
, the energy generation using uranium is environmentally friendly as it does not require the exploitation of natural resources. A very small quantity of chemical of chemicals can result in a massive amount of power production.
This
 is why the nations with advanced nuclear capability plants do not face a shortage of electricity. These merits of
this
 applied science (innovation) have made human life better
However
, there are certain demerits of the utilization of nuclear technology as well.
Firstly
, even though accidental usage of nuclear weapons can lead to catastrophic circumstances. If an irresponsible leader has access to
such
 ammunition, it becomes a matter of concern for the countries for bordering countries and
hence
, the peace is disturbed.
This
 can be witnessed in the Korean peninsula.
Secondly
, there are safety concerns associated with power generation through
this
 machinery. Technical errors and mistakes can lead to (Massive blats which results in) situations like Chornobyl repeating themselves which can actually lead to the whole civilization getting abandoned in a particular area. These negatives make
this
 innovation risky for living creatures. Conclude To conclude,
this
 essay presented the positives and negatives of nuclear automation.
Although
 the benefits can leave a positive impact on life, the drawbacks can result in situations full of crisis.
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  • Deterrence
  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
  • Rogue states
  • Radioactive waste disposal
  • Catastrophic accidents
  • Climate change
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