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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems, Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourgae people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #drink #products #levels #sugar #health #encourgae #people
Nowadays, there are many numbers of
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food
 which are easy to eat and do not waste
time
 and because of that they become popular and
people
 are enjoying them,
however
,
drawback
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the drawback
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 of
this
 matter is that
sugar
 concentration levels of
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those
thoses
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those
food
 are high enough to cause some medical conditions.
Therefore
, some
people
 hold the option that sweet products with high
sugar
level
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 should be expensive not to induce the urge of consuming
sugar
 for
people
. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
 idea due to the fact that not only it will not tackle
down
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this
 phenomenon but
also
 it can cause
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unnecessary
unnessary
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unnecessary
 problems.
To begin
 with, it is undeniable that
people
 are getting diseases
such
diabetes
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 and obesity due to the high consumption of manufactured
food
 which
contain
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 large amounts of
sugar
 but making
thoese
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those
these
food
 expensive will not mitigate the issue and will even impact
on
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the economy of one country since all of the products are connected with each other financially and making one particular product costly will unbalance the structure of
economy
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.
Moreover
, it
is
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is not guaranteed
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not
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no
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 guarantee that everyone will avoid
those
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that food
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food
 with high prices as there are still
few
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a few
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people
 left who got
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obsessed
obessed
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obsessed
 with them
will
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 keep buying and eating even if they have to pay more. At the same
time
,
as a result
 of the hectic lifestyle
people
 nowadays
facing
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, they have no
time
 to cook and
always
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 busy with their work and due to that matter,
people
 have to buy
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ready made
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food
 to
substitue
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substitute
 the cooking
time
 which was replaced by work hours. If those foods got expensive, they would work more to compensate for that problem and
maybe
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 part of their sleeping
time
 would be replaced
this
time
. So, authorities should hold
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campaigns
campagins
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campaigns
 that will
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enhance
enhace
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enhance
 the public's awareness of healthy lifestyles and by doing
this
, they might
got
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 at least a sense of knowing not to eat manufactured
food
 and drink products too much. In a nutshell, I pen down saying
this
 some issues would not
be bring
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 down by some simple solutions which could have negative effects
to
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 other systems.
Therefore
, governments and authorities should take a lot of
time
 and
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advice
advices
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 from experts to solve serious problems.
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