Some people feel that countries should produce most of the food that is eaten in their country and import as little as possible. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In
this
modern world, due to globalization
the trade of edibles between Add a comma
,globalization
nations
is drastically increased. Some global affairs departments claim that nations
should curb eatables imports by growing their own food
. In my perspective, the reason for their viewpoint, may be
to reduce dependency on other Correct your spelling
maybe
countries
for meals; however
, in my opinion
it Add a comma
,opinion
have
more drawbacks that are explored in the below Change the verb form
has
paragaraphs
.
To commence with, Correct your spelling
paragraphs
paragraph
Although
a plethora of reasons to support in-house Correct word choice
apply
food
production such
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providing
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at the
in
the list. Change preposition
of
First
and foremost, when nations
start self-production of groceries they no need to import these goods from foreign countries
which curbs
huge import taxes. Change the verb form
curb
For example
, every year the Canada
government spends more than 10% of Replace the word
Canadian
annual
budget on importing edible goods. Add an article
the annual
Moreover
, relying on others may lead to food
scarcity during wars, natural disasters, or global conflicts. To avoid,as a precaution, authorities could make self sustainbility
arrangements by motivating farmers to grow as per local demand, Correct your spelling
sustainability
as a result
, that not only curbs imports but also
provides more jobs in agriculture
sector.
Add an article
the agriculture
On the other hand
, most countries
across the globe depends
on other Change the verb form
depend
countries
for their food
because they do not have proper infrastructure and supporting weather. To begin
with, some countries
might have fertile soil but they should import fertilizers, machinery and chemicals from their neighbours which is more expensive than importing groceries. As an example
the Srilanka imports all fertilizers from Canada as they do not have manufacturing units. Add a comma
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In addition
to infrastructure, most countries
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countries'
country's
climate
do not support all types of crops Fix the agreement mistake
climates
as a result
they Correct your spelling
receive
received
recieve
them from other parts of the world. To illustrate, Correct your spelling
receive
the
Canada is not suitable for growing dates as it requires Correct article usage
apply
hot
climate Correct article usage
a hot
Correct your spelling
throughout
through out
the year, Correct your spelling
throughout
consequently
, they end up getting it from Dubai.
Finally
, to recapitulate, undoubtedly, it is a better idea to grow crops to Correct your spelling
fulfil
fullfill
local necessities rather than importing Correct your spelling
fulfil
it
from friendly Correct pronoun usage
them
nations
; however
, in my opinion
due to the aforementioned reasons governments may not be able to implement Add a comma
,opinion
this
in a near future, it requires economy
to build infrastructure and Add an article
the economy
technoloy
advancements to farm all crops in all weather.Correct your spelling
technology
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