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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion

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Many people are of the view that in the present time practical approach should be used while teaching in the class. On contrary, other pupils are of the opinion that sticking to old methods is still the better one. I,
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, agree with the former context as without change new developments in different fields are inevitable
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 new subjects have come up with the advent of time which requires more hit and learn techniques.
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the time, immoral it has been observed that change always paved way for different new ideas. Human beings always remain resistant to change but in different centuries many new methods of solving ancient problems come up due to innovation in technologies which is the base of modern-day education.
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, in recent days a decade-old mathematical problem is solved by the professor by applying a more experimental approach to it which
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, many new areas of research and technology have been added up in various science fields. Development and acquiring knowledge or skills in these fields can only be achieved through practice. Old techniques of merely passing theoretical facts are not helpful here.
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, in the current era areas like Artificial Intelligence , Cloud Computing and rocket science are
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 fresh brains to achieve success in them. Solving these algorithms must have been done through changing dynamics in a lot number of equations. To sum, up
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, it can be seen that how experimental learning is a boon over traditional methodology. It can lead to the development of various fresh discoveries and can add more learning subjects which make the life of human beings comfortable.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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