41. Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separates rooms for work. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years,

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have planned to decorate their workplace with a new design. They are now intended to implement an open space

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door before.

However

, considering both the concepts, I agree that the facilities outway its drawback. I will provide

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in favour of my statement in the forthcoming paragraphs.

First

of all, the bare

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environment will ensure honesty, accountability and transparency of any

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. very often we hear in some officers chambers is polluted by unfair means which will

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new

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official form.

Moreover

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wall free management system helps to allow common citizens to reach the boss of

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,

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is now too difficult.

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be decrease

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to make

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working station for different level officers.

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amount

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of money is now

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to make

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for officers.

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chamber concept is should no

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longer for these reasons. Day by day, all the organizations need to deploy more and more employees in their

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, which leads to sitting crisis in offices. So we can provide more seats for newly appointed staff in open place offices.

Thus

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will be more convenient and easier for service receivers as well as service providers. Fencing

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mind confined

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a short area, but free space

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broadness

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.

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,

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, who works in a single chamber is more critical than that

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one. So we should damage all bindings of

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environment to ensure proper service to peoples. In conclusion, we can come to a

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decision that, fenceless big room have

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dedication to serve the nations than those of dark one. From the above

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it is proved that common rooms

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facility outweigh its handicaps.