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you are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to take some time off work -give details of the amount of time you will need -suggest how your work could be covered while you are away Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear.....

#company #time #work #manager #-explain #-give #amount #-suggest #addresses
Dear
Mr.
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Chris, I am writing
this
 letter to request you
to
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approve my out-of-office ticket submitted on
internal
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 leave management website. Let me begin with a reason for my request, As you are aware I have registered for the Java Application Development certification;
however
, due to extended working hours could not complete my preparation for a test,
consequently
, I would like to
take-off
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 for my training to seek a subject. Moving onto the number of vacation days, My exam is scheduled
on
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second
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 week of the
next
 month. So I am planning to take leave for
entire
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first
 week, plus on my exam day,
that
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 is starting from July 01,2022 to July 08, 2022.
Finally
, I have documented and trained the support team to
backup
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 during my absence. Please do the needful!. Your's Sincerely, Raghu
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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