Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Over the recent years, It has been noticed that most people try to learn a new accent other than their native language to communicate with non-natives. It is widely accepted that youngsters
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huge success to gain the knowledge to learn other languages. In my opinion, I strongly agree that learning a new vocabulary in childhood is better
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their older counterparts. To commence with, youngsters have
a good grasping skills
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at an early
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.
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, they can easily learn, remember and recollect it again.
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, their brain is very sharp at that time.
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the new dialect in communicating
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other language
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.
For instance
, when we joined toddlers in a play school or nursery what teachers taught kids would pronounce efficiently within
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days. And they can study with
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of kids as
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can play and enjoy
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new expressions. Another reason
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children to learn linguistics as they can easily concentrate on it. As growing big, people have the other navigations like family problems, financial problems college work, and project deadlines and has to face
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.
Further
, they will get stressed more so at that
age
it is difficult to learn other languages as compared to earlier.
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Adolescent
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might have to take extra time to spend
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those
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their free time and it
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leads to mental health. To conclude here, In my point of view kids must learn at
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age
has numerous benefits as compared to elders. Learning at big
age
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a lot of patience and determination.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • neuroplasticity
  • critical period
  • language acquisition
  • linguistic proficiency
  • phonetic articulation
  • bilingualism
  • multilingual
  • immersion
  • pedagogy
  • pronunciation
  • sociolinguistics
  • accent reduction
  • retention
  • cultural assimilation
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