The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables compare the
datas
about the Correct your spelling
data
sales
of the two items, Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana, in the year 1999 and 2004 in five Use synonyms
countries
, namely Use synonyms
UK
, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
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the UK
Overall
, after a five years period, Linking Words
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee showed some inclines for all five Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
Although
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Bananas
Bananas’
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Banana’
sales
increased Use synonyms
for
some Change preposition
in
countries
, there are some losses Use synonyms
of
marketing in Change preposition
in
few
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a few
countries
of fives.
With regard to coffee, the UK had the highest growth of income,increasing Use synonyms
18.5
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by 18.5
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million
millions
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million
of
euros, for a 5 years gap Change preposition
apply
while
Switzerland doubled coffee’s Linking Words
sales
from 3 to 6 Use synonyms
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millions
. Change to singular
million
Coffee’s
demand in Belgium Change noun form
Coffee
also
increased a little more and interestingly, the rise for Denmark and Sweden showed the same gap of Linking Words
millions
of euros.
For bananas, the most grown market is in Switzerland which is up to 32 Use synonyms
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millions
of rise. Correct your spelling
million
Sales
in the UK and Belgium jumped about 3 to 4 Use synonyms
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millions
.Sadly, Sweden and Denmark’s banana markets fell some points to the digits and the most dropped one is Denmark Change to singular
million
which
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whose
sales
didn’t reach even 1 million in 2004.Use synonyms
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