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In many countries the government likes to spend more money on arts some agree with this however other hand government should spend more on health and education discuss both and give your opinion.

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`Since the beginning of the modern era, the
government
 is spending more money on the arts than a public
health
 system. all are having its own importance, and I have been discussing both of them point by point and giving my opinion in
further
 paragraphs.
First
 of all, in ancient ,time people love
art
forms
 for exposing their creativity which leads to the formation of amazing temples, mosques and churches.
For example
, Emporer Shajahan ideally built Tajmahal for the memory of his wife
Mumdas
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Monday
. On other hand, the Konark sun temple, the palace of Emporiers, and the Padmanabha Swamy temple all are wonderful creations of
art
. But unfortunately, nowadays, these
art
forms
 are not able to acquire the power of old. So , the
government
 spend more money on the development of
art
forms
. In that way, may help people to create
such
 a beautiful building.
Secondly
, nowadays
health
 and education have their
important
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importance
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. Most people are bothered about their
health
 more than any other thing. The
government
 should be given
first
 preference to
health
 and education rather than others. They are spending a lot of money on the development of the
health
 system. But
also
 helps to improve the endangered
art
forms
also
. In conclusion, the
art
forms
,
health
 and education all are having their own importance. but in my point of view,
art
forms
 are reducing day by day. So the
government
 should take care of
art
forms
 more than any other,
otherwise
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,otherwise
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 it
winn
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will
 be disappearing from the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural preservation
  • Economic benefits
  • Promotes creativity
  • Foundational
  • Holistic development
  • Basic human rights
  • National welfare
  • Balanced approach
  • Tourism industry
  • Long-term
  • Prioritizing
  • Crucial
  • Neglect
  • Cultural identity
  • Mental health support
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