You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job You should write at least 150 words.
Dear John,
Hope you are doing good!. I am migrating to your country for higher studies. I need your assistance
for
finding a part-time job to do during my study.
To give more details on Change preposition
in
course
, I have completed my Add an article
the course
bachelors
in India and scored 7.5 Change noun form
bachelor's
band
in Change to a plural noun
bands
IELTS
exam,Correct article usage
the IELTS
as a result
, I got a seat in a foreign university to pursue my masters
in Change noun form
master's
Electronincs
& Communication. Fortunately, Correct your spelling
Electronics
this
college is in the same location as your's
.
As you are aware I am going through Correct the word
yours
financial
crisis. My family is not in a position to provide meAdd an article
the financial
a financial
Add the preposition
with a
a
financial aid, Remove the article
apply
consequently
, I have to find a job not only for my expenses but also
for college fees and other accommodation charges. Moreover
, I am under a
medication which Correct article usage
apply
are
very expensive Change the verb form
is
in
overseas.
Change preposition
apply
Last
but not the least, I need your help me
to find a part-time either you can recommend in your current restaurant or send me if you are aware of any openings. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, Let me know if you find any recruiter looking for help with household chores or painting walls and ceiling
because Fix the agreement mistake
ceilings
this
skills are my cup of tea.
I will be waiting for your reply!.
Yours lovingly,
RaghuChange the determiner
these
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on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite