You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job You should write at least 150 words.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase course seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that this noun form may be incorrect.
The singular noun band follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that this noun form may be incorrect.
If you don’t want Electronincs to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It appears that the word your's is not the correct form of the possessive pronoun. Consider changing it.
The noun phrase financial crisis seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that you are missing a preposition with the verb provide. Consider adding the preposition.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun aid in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The plural verb are does not appear to agree with the singular subject a medication. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that ceiling may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It appears that the singular demonstrative this is modifying the plural noun skills. Consider using a plural demonstrative or a singular noun instead.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite