You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, -say what the participants liked about the hotel -explain why they were unhappy about the food -suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future 매

Dear John, I am an organiser from

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ABC company writing

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of participants on an event which was held on June,19 at your XYZ conference hall. To commence with, I appreciate all your work everything was pretty well arranged, especially, a significant internet download speed helped our staff to download their presentations

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to internet speed, The ambience was mindblowing and

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was well-organised. Moving on to lunch, Many spectators are unhappy with the food served in the afternoon because it was not up to a local taste and lack

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desserts. More importantly, many of our participants are vegetarians, on a contrary, no vegan food was available.

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, for future events, please ensure you hire a chief to cook authentic local dishes,

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vegetarian food and

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amount of desserts. Please respond at your earliest convenience!. Yours Sincerely, Rana