many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living?

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Worldwide population in cities are getting
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there will be
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shortage for building
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and people are preferring to buy or live in
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apartment
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essay will explain what are the advantages and disadvantages of
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apartment
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an apartment
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, buying
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blocks is
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buying a house. For
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of land
eighter
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you can build a house where
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family can live or construct a high-rise
apartment
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, in which, multiple
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can live and share the cost.
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, people
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prefer high-rise
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apartment
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due to security
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reasons
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. Apartments have common security
guard
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and blocks are very close to each other and so they can quickly reach
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each other
home
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. On other hand, they
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have some disadvantages like, people have to use shared amenities.
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occupied by some person when you want to sit.
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noises can
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or above
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walk heavily
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and music is playing very loud it can
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disturb the
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. To conclude,
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in
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a high-rise
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apartment
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have
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some advantages like cost and security, but it
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come with some disadvantages like shared amenities and
noises
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noise
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • high-rise apartment blocks
  • densely populated
  • housing shortages
  • shared amenities
  • security personnel
  • surveillance systems
  • social interaction
  • panoramic views
  • isolation
  • noise pollution
  • outdoor spaces
  • evacuation times
  • personalization
  • building regulations
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