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a friend of yours is thinging about to apply for the same course that you did at university. He/She aaked you for the advice about studying this subject.

#friend #thinging #course #university #advice
Dear John, I would like to express my gladness that you
also
 want to learn the same course which
i
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 did
last
 year. The objective is to
write
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this
 letter is to
giving
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 you
the
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 suggestion about the study which you will be going to do.
Firstly
,
this
 subject includes the information regarding coding and decoding for the achiever's level.
Moreover
, For
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 better
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white-collar
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white collar
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 office job nothing is good than
this
 course. For more details, you can search on the official university website.
Moreover
, Concordia is the institute which is located in the downtown area of the city
Montreal
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. Interestingly, the academic institution will provide you
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 prime techniques of
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studying
studing
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studying
 with the top facilities
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along with
alongwith
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along with
 the high internet speed. The University
also
 give
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job
opporunity
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opportunity
 to
the
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bright students.
Furthermore
, you can apply online by visiting the campus site or directly
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 to
reception
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the reception
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. Both the ways are fine. The application process is very easy with the need
of
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some of your documents for the proof. I am looking forward to
hear
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 from you. Best regards, Jasmeen Puar
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