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Some people think it’s better to choose friend s who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Friends
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 are part of people’s life. Others believe that it is essential to have
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a disagreement
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disagreement
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disagreements
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 with
friends
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 while some people consider
to have
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having
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friends
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 who always have the same opinions. It is certainly good for some people to have a
friend
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 who has
same
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the same
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interest
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interests
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 and likes. There will be no disagreement in any situation.
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, if they enjoy going outside to eat in a restaurant or
having
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have
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same
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the same
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 passion for clothes, there will be no problem.
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, people consider
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having
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friends
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 who disagree with them because they can improve what is missing
with
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from
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 them. The
friend
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 who is opposing the opinion of
other
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another friend
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friend
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 will result in dispute but
this
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 will improve eventually their friendship. In conclusion, I believe that
its
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it's
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 better to have
friends
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 who sometimes disagree with me because the
friend
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's intention is for the
friend
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 to be
better
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a better
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 person.
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