Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that governments which spend

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on

arts

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and

culture

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activities are criticized by their people,

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, I do agree that the government should

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a priority on spending tax-payer's

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, I completely disagree with

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funding

arts

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On the one hand,

those public

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who argue that the authorities should not financially support cinema or local T.V series , and they should go to enhance the education, health, welfare and military. those opponents have many

evidences

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to argue with.

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, each government has limited resources

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to its costs,

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, the public

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the right to ask the government when and where and which the appropriate plan to work with.

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, they consider that celebrities gain huge

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for nothing and they should act or perform these works for a little amount of

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.

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, supporting local culture and heritage is reflecting the face of society and

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the country as a tourism destination for others,

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, increasing the

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income which is the most important target for any successful

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job opportunities for graduates especially those who are studying and interested in

arts

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. If we take the tourism as

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industry we should not consider

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improvement absorb, whilst they argue

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which the perfect policy to adopt, they can see many successful vivid stories

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sum up,

arts

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and other

culture

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activities are not wasting

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or time, it could be an important income resource.