The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of means of transport namely
car
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, bicycle,
bus
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,
train
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and walking, used to travel to a
university
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in 2004 and 2009.
Overall
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, the figure for
car
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and
bus
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made up the largest
number
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of entire means of transport in both examined years
while
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the
number
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of
people
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travelling by
train
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and on foot remained almost unchanged. Remarkably, riding to the
university
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became more popular in 2009. In 2004, 51% of
people
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drive a
car
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to the
university
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in comparison with 33% going by
bus
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. After five years, under the charges for
car
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parking and the building of a new
bus
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stop in the
university
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, the figure for
car
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travelling decreased by nearly a half,
whereas
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the
number
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of
people
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going to the
university
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by
bus
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increased by approximately 10%. The figure for
train
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passengers and
people
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walking to the
university
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in 2004 was 3% and 4% respectively. Noticeably, those figures were somewhat the same in 2009 with 4% for
train
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and 6% for walking. There was a clear trend over the period of five years that more
people
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preferred riding a bike to the
university
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because the
number
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of
people
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travelling by bicycle in 2009 increased nearly double, compared to only 9% in 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, university, number, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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