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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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From
past
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 to nowadays, especially, many changes have
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occurred
occured
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occurred
 in the field of business. One of the most noticeable points is the work
distributions
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 between
males
 and
females
. When it is compared to
working
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 hours of men and women, due to the heavy business conditions, women commence obtaining more working burdens.
As a result
 of
this
 situation, both men and women have had to share the house needs in order to carry easier them. From my point of view, it is a reasonable solution to be responsible for home necessities
in
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same
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 levels. If it is looked back at history, it is a quite
distincitive
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distinctive
 the job
discribtions
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descriptions
description
 for
males
 and
females
. Generally, while
woman
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women
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 were in charge of house
missions
such
 as cooking and cleaning,
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the man
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man
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 had to bring money to meet
own
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their own
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family's
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families
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requires
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.
In addition
 to that,
woman
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women
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 were typical symbols of being
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a mother
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mother
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mothers
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. Most of
their
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times
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time
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, they were
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for
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 children. When it is reached our modern age, a great deal
differents
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 have emerged. Because, in the ways
of
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economical, it is not possible to fund the family expenses by only one member,
such
 as
father
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. The most important reason is
the
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life expensiveness. By it is very
nature
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, as the father model in families works, now, mothers or
females
 are expected to assist
to
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their families and
unfortunately
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this
 transformation
is render
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 to give up undeliberately some home
missions
.
However
, not only
females
 but
also
males
 are forced to help
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the woman
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woman
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women
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. Compared to the past,
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today's
todays
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today
,
males
 should share the home
missions
in
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 equal levels with
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a woman
the woman
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woman
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women
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. To recapitulate, if the explanations and examples which are given above are analyzed, the best solution for families and individuals is that all
missions
 should be distributed.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • In general

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