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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

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In recent times, the immigration of skilled manpower has increased drastically mainly in the field of applied science, computer and medicine. Many consider that the mass
movement
 of talented people will lead to
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 drain in developing
countries
.
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countries
 due to migration in developed
countries
. There are huge opportunities in
first
-
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world world
countries
 for a talented workforce due to technological advancement. The lifestyle, work-life balance and rewards for the same job are remarkable as compared to
second
 world
countries
 which have attracted immigrants. The immigrants earn
a high amounts
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 in stronger currencies and send the same to their native country which is
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 situation for both. The higher migration of educated people is alarming and may lead to a shortage of talent which can create a hindrance in
development
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the development
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 of poor nations if
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the government
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government
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 do not take the necessary initiatives.
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, from India every year thousands of youngsters migrate to Australia, Canada and America and settle there for a better life. The
movement
 can not be avoided by strict laws;
nevertheless
, the respective governments can encourage
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talent by establishing a suitable reward system. The
movement
 of engineers and doctors provides them with more exposure to new technology and helps to enhance their knowledge as well. The training and skill improvement would be beneficial for the nation to progress fast. The immigration of doctors, engineers and computer science experts all over the world from one nation to another nation is quite an ordinary process and can not be avoided. The
movement
 can be more beneficial to balance the talent pool. In conclusion, the balance migration of an educated workforce would be beneficial to the entire world.
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