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some people think that is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. other, however , belive that they should be taught in mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In recent years, there has been an argument among people that children of
both
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 genders should be taught in separate schools
instead
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 of
co-education
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. In
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 essay, I shall discuss
both
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 perspectives and provide my opinion. I personally side with those who argue children should learn together. Numbers of reasons support why kids learn together in
co-education
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 schools.
Firstly
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, the primary goal of the school is to educate
students
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 to create a gender equality society. Society can not be fulfilled without the equal participation of girls and boys. In simpler terms
co-education
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 creates friendships among fellow
students
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 that will lead to a healthy society.
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, Knowledge can be shared among
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.
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, when
students
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 go to work
both
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 genders feel comfortable while providing ideas.
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, a girl who studied in
co-education
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 can comfortably talk to their colleagues of her without hesitation.
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, those who argue
students
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 of different gender should be taught in separate schools give the following reasons.
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, they believe teaching
students
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 in a separate school no longer required to communicate with another gender
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 it will reduce teenage-related issues like a love
affairs
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.
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, it helps them to concentrate on their studies and excel in them. In conclusion,
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 there are
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 advantages and disadvantages to educating children together, I strongly believe that the pros are far more than the cons.
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