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In your opinion which one do you prefer ebooks or old school book reading. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both.

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There are both advantages and disadvantages associated with reading ebooks or real
books
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. In my opinion,the positive aspects of using an
ebook
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 will take precedence over the real book. Nowadays, along with the development of societies and equipped with the virtual tools
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 as the internet. There have been many changes in
people
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's habits as well as consumption patterns. One of these changes is reading
books
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. most the
people
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 have a smartphone or a system the computer at home or workplace, all of these changes provide desirable conditions that
people
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 have the right to choose their favourite
ebook
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 and download it on their cellphone with any size or content ,
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, they can read those anywhere,
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, they can download their interested
ebook
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 even with big size and reading it at travel and bus or any place
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 can share it with other
people
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 at the same time.
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, the price of an
ebook
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 is very cheaper than buying a real book.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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 particularly, the elderly who do not have enough knowledge about smartphones and online websites which offer online services prefer to read real
books
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 and enjoy pages, shapes and even the smell of paper.
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,newly published
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 and some
books
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 which are exclusive do not find in online services so, their fans have to supply real
books
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. In conclusion, I completely agree with ebooks because of their comfortable and their low price
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 easiest carry. And the most important reason is, to avoid destroying natural resources.
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