You are planing for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: tell him/her why you want to take a vacation describe your plan invite him/her to go with you.

Dear Jeames, Hope you are doing well and healthy. Just writing
this
letter to let you know that I am planning to go to Hawaii for the summer vacation. After I finished tedious work
last
week, I decided to take a break and refresh my mind by travelling oversea. I have made the decision to visit
this
beautiful island by the 8th of May. Both my wife and my children will join me, so we will have four people in a group.
However
, I mistakenly bought 5 flight tickets from South America Airlines.
Therefore
, I sincerely invite you to come with us. Don't worry, I can take care of booking hotels, restaurants, etc. All you need to do is to bring a couple of sunglasses since it is quite scorching in Hawaii.  Anyway, let me know what you think. I am looking forward to your response.  Cheers  Clarence Peng
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