The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

day and age, the number of

cars

in the

traffic

system has been increasingly exorbitant and the issue in Britain mentioned is a clear indication.

This

trend has raised a belief that novel means of transport should come into being and globally-scaled regulations to put car ownership and use under control should be applied. From my perspective, I completely side with the argument and here are the reasons. The

first

merit of the conduct is that it may contribute to the reduction of air pollution, which is likely to be of great benefit to humans’ health. Mass production of

cars

has heavily contaminated the atmosphere due to

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fumes emitted from these vehicles. As a consequence, those emission gases deteriorate human’s physical health with their chance of contracting respiratory diseases

increasing

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significantly. In order to tackle

this

problem, new environmentally-friendly forms of transport would be an impeccable solution.

Additionally

, the governments setting a limit on car ownership of their population may

also

have a positive effect to protect the environment since the manufacture of

cars

may be subject to several restrictions. Another advantage of the regulation is

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helping the roads avoid exceeding

traffic

congestions

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congestion

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. Nations with

overcrowded

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an overcrowded

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population

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populations

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such

as Vietnam, Indonesia, and many other developing countries tend to experience

traffic

jam

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jams

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on a daily basis

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since more and more

cars

are being produced and used to meet the demand of consumers. If new

traffic

-related rules are applied with the aim of cutting down on

this

means of transportation, more space on roads would be available, which facilitates the population’s daily schedules being completed.

For instance

, in 2014, there was a regulation in Korea that prevented people from owning more than 2

cars

being newly applied, which

then

considerably reduced the

traffic

congestion in the country. In conclusion,

although

some people may suppose that the conduct is inappropriate,

on the contrary

, I personally believe that it would bring great benefits to the environment and

traffic

.