2.You have moved to a new place. Write a letter to a friend giving reason why you moved to that place. Describe that place. Invite your friend to visit you.

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Dear Smith, I hope

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letter finds you well! I would like to let know that I travelled to Canada because of my work situation. I got an offer from a great company which is in Toronto, Canada and

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I had to change my place, too. My previous place in Krakow

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didn't

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satisfied

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me and people did not speak English. here in Toronto there are many types of people who have their

nationality

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own nationality

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and we can easily communicate with them, they are friendly and kind. the weather in hear is almost cold but has

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a nice and beautiful overview of the city. everybody uses bicycles and trains for transport.

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task response

Ensure to address all parts of the task prompt clearly. Provide more details about how the new place in Toronto is different from Krakow.

greeting and closing

Ensure to use appropriate greetings and closings in formal letters. Consider adding a concluding statement to wrap up the letter.

task response

Clear explanation of the reason for the move to Canada.

coherence and cohesion

Description of the new place in Toronto, highlighting the diversity of the people and transportation methods.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

111 words

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